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Censored Haiku and Translations of Matsuo Bashō, by Rick Moody

 

Censored Haiku

this one talks about
[    ] and [    ] and the
dark [      ] at [   ] [    ]

 

the first chill breeze like
a refresher on the truth
but [  ] [  ] [  ] [  ]

 

all this [   ][   ][   ]
[  ] is [  ] [  ] end up
armies [  ] [   ] [   ]

 

yesterday we [  ]
[  ] dawn [  ] [  ] [  ] heavy
fog [   ] [  ] semis

 

[   ] is our [  ]
calling said [ ] [ ] [ ]
oracle [ ] [ ]

 

the [ ] peeling
[  ] [  ] [  ] [  ] black hole
[   ] [   ]

 

[  ] darkness [  ]
[  ] [   ] [  ] despots
naming [  ] [   ] [   ]

 

censoring haiku
because censoring all of
the implications

 

the oaks [ ] [ ]
witness [ ] [ ] haiku [ ]
[ ] [ ] distress [ ]

 

genocide [   ] [   ]
[  ] [    ] [   ] [   ] [  ] ceaseless
[    ]

 

the antichrist [ ]
[ ] identified [ ] [ ]
[  ] [  ] [  ]

 

I don’t [  ] if I
[  ] [  ] on [  ] [  ]
[  ] [  ] [  ]right [  ]

 

censoring [  ]
[  ] censoring [  ] [  ]
[  ] [  ]

 

 

Selected Haiku by Bashō in Which Some Words Are Replaced with Notes from J. S.
Bach’s Orchestral Suite #3 in D Major, BWV 1068, II. Aria

522

shizukasa ya 
iwa ni shimi iru
semi no koe

a louder ♪♫
by reason ♩ cicadas
on the mountain face

 

394

chichi haha no
shikirini koishi
kiji no koe

motherfather ♬
never so unlost as in
the pheasant’s ♪♩♪

 

948

kiku no nochi
daikon no hoka
sara ni nashi

after ♫♪♩♫♪♬♩
nothing no nothing at all
but stale ♪♫♪

 

788

toshi doshi ya
saru ni kisetaru
saru no men

yes year after ♩
on the monkey’s face the mask
of a monkey’s ♪♫

 

515

natsu kusa ya
tsuwamono domo ga
yume no ato

parched ♬♪♩♫♪
for the slain warriors ♩♪
heir ♫♪♩♪♬♪♩

 

363

jōroku ni
kagerō takashi
ishi no ue

sixteen ♪♬♪♩♪
feet of being and non-being
above the ♩♪

 

173

chō yo chō yo
morokoshi no
haikai towan

you two ♫♪♩♪♬♪
let me ask again ♪♩
the Taoist ♩♪♫

 

751

uo tori no
kokoro wa shirazu
toshi wasure

heart of ♪♩ nor fish
know you nothing ♬♪♩
when year-forgetting

 

980

ume ga ka ya
mi nu yo no hito ni
gyoi o uru

above all the ♪♫
and its plum blossom ♩♪♬
unmet ♫♪♩♪♬♪

 

628

tsuma koute
nezasa kazuku ya
——————

wife-abandoned
I burrowed ♪♩ the field
. . .

 

793

tōki yori
aware wa tsuka no
sumire-gusa

the ♬♪♩♫♪ herbs
grow lavender on the ♪♫
where we buried ♩♪

 

560

mono kaite
ōgi hikisaku
nagori kana

in leaving ♪♩♪ was
nothing to write my ♫♪ upon
but the old torn ♩♪♬

 

Note:

*I arrived at my selections by meandering without a specific agenda. Like Bashō on his travels. *I have included no title here, though Bashō occasionally employs them. *I kept to the meter, even if it meant bending the implication slightly. *Polysemy is a great virtue of the haiku, which probably cannot be understood in English, nor, especially, without the presence of kanji. *It’s not about whether it’s accurate, it’s a record of the moment; it’s not about the form, it’s a record of the moment; it’s not about the other translations, many of which are profound, it’s a record of the moment. *The numbering conventions with the haiku here follow Fitzsimmons, the best modern translator of Bashō into English. *The composition by Bach, from which these notes are derived, is here in the piano transcription. *I am also gripped by the last (arguable) unfinished (arguable) fugue from Die Kunst der Fugue: “Contrapunctus XIV or Fuga a 3 Soggetti.”

 

(Image: Cy Twombly’s Untitled (1966))

 

  • Rick Moody is the author of many books, including Garden State, The Ice Storm (which was adapted into an acclaimed feature film directed by Ang Lee), Purple America, The Ring of Brightest Angels Around Heaven, Demonology, The Four Fingers of Death, Hotels of North America, and Right Livelihoods: Three Novellas. In 1998, Moody received the Addison Metcalf Award from the American Academy of Arts and Letters. In 2000, he received a Guggenheim fellowship. Moody's The Black Veil: A Memoir with Digressions won the NAMI/Ken Book Award and the PEN Martha Albrand Prize for excellence in the memoir. Moody's The Diviners won the Mary Shelley Award from the Media Ecology Association. His short fiction and journalism have been anthologized in Best American Stories 2001, Best American Essays 2004, Best American Essays 2008, Year’s Best Science Fiction #9, Year’s Best Fantasy, and, multiply, in the Pushcart Prize anthology. He has taught at the State University of New York at Purchase, Brown University, the Bennington College Writing Seminars, the Fine Arts Work Center in Provincetown, the New York Writers Institute, and the New School for Social Research. He currently teaches at Tuft University's School of the Museum of Fine Arts.

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